Faculty+Feedback+and+Suggestions

3/31/15 (M Dudiak) Looks great, Becky. I can tell you have kept up with it and care about how it looks as well as the valuable content. Keep going.

3/28/15 (Becky) I updated my front page, I added my praxis 2 scores, and added 4 artifacts. I am going to add more artifacts, edit old reflective narratives, and update my resume over spring break as well as do my screencast-o-matic.

3/3/15 (M Dudiak) Thanks for the update. It all makes sense. I can't wait to see what you add. I think your Philosophy of Education looks fine for this purpose. If MCPS asks for a writing sample and you choose to use this we can look at it again.

2/22/15 (Becky) I fixed all the pictures and took out any artifacts from semester 5. I am waiting until after I finish the Kindergarten rotation before I make any decisions on what I want to add from this rotation. I am going to add artifacts the weekend in between the two rotations. Can you look over my philosophy and give me any feedback? Thanks.

1/25/15 (M Dudiak) Love all your pictures and sample student work. Please keep that up as you add in new artifacts and or swap some out for lessons from your first rotation. Only suggestion--it is preferred to have the same format for all artifacts. I think it would help evaluators if the pictures of students at the top of RNs would be moved to below the JPTAAR. that way they have some context for them after reading the detail. Nice job keeping current with your portfolio and updating it over the winter break. I appreciate it.

8/18/14 (MDudiak) Nice look overall look and feel to your portfolio so far. I would remove the lesson evaluation forms from your portfolio. We consider that feedback your business only--if you don't include them for all lessons it could be perceived those lesson weren't good.

I am glad to see you including some samples from instruction to help strengthen the artifact. Continue to do that moving forward with evidence of student work as well.

4/8/14 (L Shiffman) It is wonderful that you already have 10 artifacts with reflective narratives. I know you plan to revise your video to make the pictures brighter and the speech clearer. Be sure to put an appropriate title on each RN and to left margin everything. Also consider limiting the number of work samples that you include.

Keep up the great work.

5/14 (L Shiffman)

More than the 10 required artifacts and RNs across many standards Nice to see the mentor feedback on the Interactive Read Aloud Remember to add semester to the Interactive Writing artifact Consider adding more visuals in the future.

1/10/14 (MDudiak)

Personal section: I liked learning more about you on your video. You did a nice job tying your personal interests with your professional ones. Glad to see your personal section is complete.

Professional section: Happy to see you are embedding your documents. All your artifacts look appropriate and sound. Good start on writing your reflective narratives. Terrific way to begin your portfolio journey.